Post by Deleted on Dec 28, 2012 17:16:01 GMT -5
I know, such a bland name, but hey, that's me ^^
Mystery lugged herself along the slick path of one of the mountains of the Kinath. She had been walking for hours, and began to grow tired. She knew she was close to reaching the top, because she was beginning to be able to see much of southern Anikira in a single glance. She knew that climbing to the top of the mountain and back down the other side wasn't the brightest idea, but she knew that she should toughen u pa bit if she was going to be joining a pack.
As she neared closer to the top, she began to shiver in the cold. Her gray paws sank into the snow-capped mountainside, and each pawstep became harder as she climbed up the steep, slippery slope.
Once she was close to the top, she decided she'd climbed high enough and began to circle around to the other side of the mountain where she could climb down. A cold wind bit at her skin, but she pushed herself along, and trudged along the slippery path.
But then her paw slipped. The ice was too slick. She couldn't find another foothold to save her from the treacherous fall.
She gave a whine, then went tumbling down the side of the mountain. she grasped for any place that she could hold, but she had no luck. She was nearing the bottom of the mountain fast, but expected a hard landing, seeing that to the side she was falling on towered another mountain.
Seconds later, she braced for a terribly hard impact, but it never came. Instead, she felt herself falling into something. When she felt that she had stopped, she opened her eyes. All around her was white. She had fallen into a rather deep snowdrift. She crawled on along the hole she had made in the drift, and finally managed to reach the top of the snowdrift, and the open air.
Just far from the mountains, she saw wolves milling around. She shook all of her thoughts into place and headed for them. As she approached, she shook the snow out of her pelt and tried to compose herself.
When she reached the wolves, the first thing she asked to no one in particular was. ''Is there an Alpha here I can speak to?'' She then looked around. ''I wish to join the pack.'' She then waited patiently, as if she thought the alpha could hear her.
(sorry it's so wordy. i wanted to show how she got there, and not just when she made it to the pack)
Mystery lugged herself along the slick path of one of the mountains of the Kinath. She had been walking for hours, and began to grow tired. She knew she was close to reaching the top, because she was beginning to be able to see much of southern Anikira in a single glance. She knew that climbing to the top of the mountain and back down the other side wasn't the brightest idea, but she knew that she should toughen u pa bit if she was going to be joining a pack.
As she neared closer to the top, she began to shiver in the cold. Her gray paws sank into the snow-capped mountainside, and each pawstep became harder as she climbed up the steep, slippery slope.
Once she was close to the top, she decided she'd climbed high enough and began to circle around to the other side of the mountain where she could climb down. A cold wind bit at her skin, but she pushed herself along, and trudged along the slippery path.
But then her paw slipped. The ice was too slick. She couldn't find another foothold to save her from the treacherous fall.
She gave a whine, then went tumbling down the side of the mountain. she grasped for any place that she could hold, but she had no luck. She was nearing the bottom of the mountain fast, but expected a hard landing, seeing that to the side she was falling on towered another mountain.
Seconds later, she braced for a terribly hard impact, but it never came. Instead, she felt herself falling into something. When she felt that she had stopped, she opened her eyes. All around her was white. She had fallen into a rather deep snowdrift. She crawled on along the hole she had made in the drift, and finally managed to reach the top of the snowdrift, and the open air.
Just far from the mountains, she saw wolves milling around. She shook all of her thoughts into place and headed for them. As she approached, she shook the snow out of her pelt and tried to compose herself.
When she reached the wolves, the first thing she asked to no one in particular was. ''Is there an Alpha here I can speak to?'' She then looked around. ''I wish to join the pack.'' She then waited patiently, as if she thought the alpha could hear her.
(sorry it's so wordy. i wanted to show how she got there, and not just when she made it to the pack)