Post by benemal on Dec 31, 2012 14:10:53 GMT -5
The sea is dangerous
The salt mixed with the sanguine imprint in his fur. The black coat matted with blood as he swam for his life. His mind raced with fear as every breath followed a swallow of the sea. I will surely die here. The shore was a lot farther than his legs could carry, and should he sink, the undertow would take him away. He desperately kicked his legs, each pant draining at his life. Suddenly he was picked from his position, a huge wave throwing him forward. With a crash, his body hit the sand beneath. He looked up for a split second, seeing that he had some how managed to reach the shore.
A chance at survival
Noctem finally pulled himself from the ragged waters, dragging his emaciated body onto the beach. The sand was cold, the winter deep in the area. It took all of his will to not fall and die, the wound on his undercarriage having opened. His mind continued to race, attempting to find a solution to his imminent death. The adrenaline in his blood kept his eyes moving and his legs kicking, the shiver of his body a sign of the freezing water that attracted itself to him. He built up the strength to finally look up, only to see a daunting forest, a wall of trees a hundred feet in front of him. Anything makes for better shelter than this. A sharp pain dug itself into his side, the gash opening a little more. His body could not handle the rip, and a fountain of sea water poured itself from his mouth, searing his throat as he expelled it. He knew he had to move to the shelter, he could not risk staying in the open while he recovered.
A cold coffin
Noctem finally reached the forest, the cold dirt turning to mud beneath his paws. His tail hid between his legs as his ragged body crawled into the underbrush. His nose raced to pick up a scent of anything. Any food to help him survive this new world. Unfortunately, his own blood mixed with the scents of the forest kept his senses at bay. "So it comes to this." he whimpered, his jagged voice dampened by the salt around his muzzle. The slow steps were all he could make before finally collapsing in the dirt bed beneath him. At least I made it from the sand. His eyes slowly shut as the cold overtook him, slipping him into the realm of unconsciousness.
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The salt mixed with the sanguine imprint in his fur. The black coat matted with blood as he swam for his life. His mind raced with fear as every breath followed a swallow of the sea. I will surely die here. The shore was a lot farther than his legs could carry, and should he sink, the undertow would take him away. He desperately kicked his legs, each pant draining at his life. Suddenly he was picked from his position, a huge wave throwing him forward. With a crash, his body hit the sand beneath. He looked up for a split second, seeing that he had some how managed to reach the shore.
A chance at survival
Noctem finally pulled himself from the ragged waters, dragging his emaciated body onto the beach. The sand was cold, the winter deep in the area. It took all of his will to not fall and die, the wound on his undercarriage having opened. His mind continued to race, attempting to find a solution to his imminent death. The adrenaline in his blood kept his eyes moving and his legs kicking, the shiver of his body a sign of the freezing water that attracted itself to him. He built up the strength to finally look up, only to see a daunting forest, a wall of trees a hundred feet in front of him. Anything makes for better shelter than this. A sharp pain dug itself into his side, the gash opening a little more. His body could not handle the rip, and a fountain of sea water poured itself from his mouth, searing his throat as he expelled it. He knew he had to move to the shelter, he could not risk staying in the open while he recovered.
A cold coffin
Noctem finally reached the forest, the cold dirt turning to mud beneath his paws. His tail hid between his legs as his ragged body crawled into the underbrush. His nose raced to pick up a scent of anything. Any food to help him survive this new world. Unfortunately, his own blood mixed with the scents of the forest kept his senses at bay. "So it comes to this." he whimpered, his jagged voice dampened by the salt around his muzzle. The slow steps were all he could make before finally collapsing in the dirt bed beneath him. At least I made it from the sand. His eyes slowly shut as the cold overtook him, slipping him into the realm of unconsciousness.
435 words